[trying my hand at poetry....]
its raining outside.
constant, pitter patter.
muddy puddles, muddy streams.
colorful umbrellas,greener trees.
some are happy, some are snappy, others move on.
its raining outside.
constant, pitter patter.
some crouch under carts and shiver.
some look up in the rain and smile.
some fuss, some cuss, others move on.
its raining outside.
constant, pitter patter.
pebbles drown with a plonk.
paper boats float across.
some stay, some give away, others move on.
its raining outside.
constant, pitter patter.
slush that clings to your feet.
a rainbow of spilt oil on water.
some wink, some blink, others move on.
its raining outside.
constant, pitter patter.
its the song of life.
for those ears that strive.
some listen, some hear, others move on.
[ .....And am happie with the outcome. ]
5 comments:
Some real pensive thoughts.I guess its reflections of our times and observations about life as a whole.Good work,.
Ajit, Tim, Thanks! :-)
Its encouraging to have a debut well-received!
Datz a sensational debut ! I just loved this one ! Very very charming...:)
Keep up the good work, dear !
Hey! Thanks Sats. Its nice to get a pat-on-back from YOU. :-)
I too am happy(pleased) with the result. That qualifies as an oscar winning debue.
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